Professional Communication
The highlighted areas are the areas that need to be revised. This was the report I received. Please make the revisions as soon as possible and send me a revised version of the paper. Look back at the items I have already sent you and make sure you are Competent in every aspect of the paper. This is the only way I am able to pass. Thank you again. Also, this paper has a lot of Articulation errors. I am also sending back the paper that you sent me with highlighted areas that are grammatically incorrect and need to be revised as well. Make sure you have complete sentences and that the submission is articulated well.
General comments:
Professional Communication (Articulation) – This well-crafted submission is appropriately organized; useful headings are readily available. Sentence fluency and parts of speech errors disrupt the readability of the work.
Content -A presentation on Project in Organizational Leadership and Interprofessional Team Development is presented. The essay clearly recognizes the field that requires immediate attention is ensuring that the families and patients have access to a web portal that ensures a fast response. An excellent overview of ensuring a web portal system that is easily accessible, reliable and simple is presented in great detail. The discussion precisely addresses the financial implications of the strategy include an increase in the service fee of the patients. A detailed description of a specific healthcare setting, including the population served, facility type, and the community, is not evident in the discussion. The identification of the strengths and/or weaknesses of a specific healthcare organization for each of the 11 domains is not evident in the analysis. The description of a specific change theory is not evident in the submission. How the methods will be used to specifically evaluate the effectiveness of the strategy in increasing patient-centered care is not evident in the paper. The importance of cultural diversity within a team, including representation and how cultural diversity within a team specifically supports patient-centered, culturally competent care is unclear in the description. How the transformational leadership style is relevant to implementing the identified strategy is unclear in the essay. The identification of the steps to collaboratively implement the strategy, including team members and their individual responsibilities, is not evident in the submission. Methods of how the team will specifically communicate the strategy and intended outcomes to the healthcare organization is not evident in the discussion. The recognition of a specific tool that will help the team develop self-assessment skills is not evident in the paper.
Detailed Results
Articulation of Response (clarity, organization, mechanics)
Approaching Competency- The candidate provides weak articulation of response.
Comments on this criterion: Thoughtful information is structured in a logical and cohesive manner. Sentence fluency and parts of speech concerns, mostly relating to missing and extraneous words, incorrect noun and verb forms, missing articles, disagreement, and unclear phrasing, affect the overall clarity of the response.
A. Business Practices
Competent- The analysis includes how business practices, regulatory requirements, and reimbursement impact patient centered care within a healthcare organization.
Comments on this criterion: The paper clearly states that as hospital and health system reimbursements become more closely tied to clinical outcomes as well as patient satisfaction, patient experience surveys are becoming an increasingly valuable tool for healthcare organizations to guide efforts for improving the patient experience.
B. Self-Assessment Tool
